Just A Little Boat In A Huge Sea.... Comments

Ever so Beautifully mesmerizing Dear! .. May you have an incredible journey! .. Definitely Beyond #ING! ..+++++++++++++++++Wow+++++++++++++++++++++++++

Only You Dear Susan could capture this, and word this with such Awe, Beauty, and Tranquility! .. Amazing! .. I mean really like WOW! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++

Great! Loved the tale of your little boat. A wonderful poem dear poetess. Top score

A very moving portrayal of life's journey showing everything is just ephemeral. Our life can be changed by fate or by our choices in life. Top Marks and to my favorites.

This magnificent poem transported me to various scenes; scenes that are poignant yet beautiful and a dream for a better tomorrow. A reader will never get tired going through this beautiful poem. So unforgettable.

What a beautiful poem adorned with crystalline images and touching poetic expressions. Line after line of beauty brought about by the wonders of nature tinged with sadness and a dream that uplifts one's soul.

Bri Edwards, I am sorry to hear that you sleep-walk--I have learned how to go to sleep sitting up on the couch--tis a wonderfully freeing experience And you don't risk jamming your toe into a chair leg! ! !

Susan this is a great poem bravo!

Magnificent write..... powerful indeed....thank u, dear poetess...

Wow, I love this…velvet peace…that term is like the diamond set in a ring, outstanding my forever friend

Indeed, Paradox of this existence, we all are tiny vessels drifting in this vast ocean and playing our role. Wonderful poem. Full ****

'Lovely poem felt with deep resonance; I know this boat, these skies, this sea. Thanks for sending this to me.'---A. Alli

Susan, I sent this poem link to the (to me) legendary independent filmmaker Antero Alli. He faces a terminal illness but still blazes with creativity. I'm pasting in his response to your poem.

OH, I loved the title to begin with, before reading the poem. ALSO, after reading it, though I HAD noticed commas or lack of them, I don't think I'd noticed ANY sentence-ending punctuation marks, AND THEIR ABSENCE CAUSED no PROBLEMS FOR ME, which is sometimes not the case in other poems. : )

Susan, I SO ENJOYED your poem, but my eyes already were tired, and NOW I may have to 'sleepwalk' to find my BED. Goodnight! ;) bri

To find my 'sailboat poem', just type 'sailboat' into the Search box and click 'Enter' on your keyboard. It's title is A Sailboat's Last Thoughts.......[human/Sailboat Nature; Drama; Weather]

BUT, Readers, I, Bri, did write a poem about a boat (& its first and its last owners) , a sailboat. Care to read it?

(cont.) I have written some serious poetry & a lot of humorous poems also. In the Soothing-Poetry category, I doubt I could match you.

Susan, This it T-R-E-M-E-N-D-O-U-S Poetry! ! ! ! 8 stars? Rats! I'm limited to giving 5, which I now have done.(cont.)

line 6 (6, COUNTING UPWARD FROM THE LAST LINE) : 'while the quiet, gentle, waves undulated lulling me to sleep' I'd remove the comma in front of 'waves' but I'd place commas after 'undulated' and after 'sleep'. Agree? ?