Hazel Durham

Just A Wish Upon A Star - Poem by Hazel Durham

Rivers cut and wind through the lush countryside,
Your love cut's and wind's through my besotted heart,
As consistent as the sea tide,
With echoes of our laughter and our smiles so wide.

A drum beat, reminds me of us dancing in the old school hall,
I remember the time, you tried to jump over quite a high wall,
You fell to your knees, getting bruised and cut,
I jokingly called you my sweet mutt.

But my heart moved to always save you from pain,
We walked the two miles home, you pointed out the galaxy of stars,
You turned and told me, they shone from my eyes too,
Then we just wished upon a star, as we admired the glittering view.

To always love each other, like a rose that eternally blooms,
No time for any days of gloom,
We walked back to our digs and our simple room,
As the dawn broke with the tuneful chorus of birds.

Singing with such joy at our emotions sealed,
As we promised never to leave each other
With the glorious sound of nature's appeal
Even the trees acknowledging how we feel.

Our hearts melting into one,
We will talk and walk into the distant land of eternity,
Always dancing and having plenty of fun,
Forever under the warm light of our own sun.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Just A Wish Upon A Star by Hazel Durham

  • (10/19/2014 3:42:00 AM)

    Lovely poem with very nice thoughts in the sky among the stars wow love is surely in the air 'Always dancing and having plenty of fun, Forever under the warm light of our own sun.' A melting pot of love...regards (Report) Reply

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  • Ramesh Rai (4/30/2014 6:04:00 PM)

    So much kindness and love are flushed through soft write. (Report) Reply

  • Sekharan Pookkat (4/27/2014 12:36:00 PM)

    A beautiful romantic poem- i like it (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde (4/25/2014 5:49:00 AM)

    .........a poem packed with emotions, a cute short poem overflowing with love and imagery............
    ........Full of positiveness, it beautifully brings together love mates into a an eternal unison...........
    A lovely write from your pen again........
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  • Valerie Dohren (4/21/2014 8:27:00 AM)

    Very romantic poem, beautifully written. (Report) Reply

  • (4/21/2014 6:08:00 AM)

    a new and another great poem by you........well done (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (4/20/2014 5:12:00 AM)

    Even the trees acknowledging how we feel.
    A beautiful write Hazel filling us all with incredible memories. Thank You
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  • Dinesh Nair (4/20/2014 1:54:00 AM)

    A poem rich in images and illustrations thereof. These days in the shade are our great times. (Report) Reply

  • Kanav Justa (4/19/2014 12:40:00 AM)

    , , , , such a sweet write, , , the love that you jave seems so pure and real, , just like that of a child, , , , with wonderfull examples you have expressed your feelings in this poem, , , , this might be the cutest love poem from your pen, , ,
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  • Alice Perfect (4/13/2014 6:44:00 PM)

    Oh my,
    my heartbeat increased,
    that kind of love
    can raise the deceased!
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  • Mihaela Pirjol (4/13/2014 9:20:00 AM)

    Sweet poem, well written.I can relate to it. Mihaela (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, April 14, 2014

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