Just Thoughts Poem by David Beckham

Just Thoughts



Your words are especially beautiful
They take deeper meaning each time I read it
Like dripping faucet, it seems to have a pulse of its own
Every dropp of your word resonates with me
Every dropp gives a life of its own

The energy from it ripples on through
And clothed in great aura of your words, I emerge with a huge smile
Benign for sure, but because I write from the heart, I feel as though you complete the response
Very interesting, I observe in awe
But you touched on the things that pull me through
I am thankful for those kind words

You wonder about me being a student, yes it’s beautiful
Though sometimes, it explains why I’m going bald
The solutions so hard, I pull at my hair in agony
But when I get it right, it’s too late and I can’t put it back on

This is very unique, in response this way, I never reply
But if to your Doctor, lawyer and priest you tell the truth
Well, please find here, dear poet this I write to you
I know you not in person, but I can’t keep this to myself
For to you they truly belong.

Cheers

Just thoughts.



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To Jenny Gordon, thanks for this inspiration. I am honored.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 24 February 2011

Words are so powerful. And used in a positive way, they bring such comfort and healing. I love this poem. So encouraging. You've emphasized the significance of poetry - that it is a powerful and unique gift.10

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Jenny Gordon 17 February 2011

You sweetheart! You are honored? You are too kind to wee nobody me! Marvelissimo, thus graciously honored, please accept my sincerest thanks, I never dreamed....you're too sweet! It is very tender, realistic, poetic, and poignant with a delightful touch of humor! I am unworthy...thank you so very much! This is an excellent tribute to the joys of PH where folk from all over make friends commenting on each other's cogitations, thus sharing and touching hearts unseen, through simple kindness in our shared passion. Lovely! Your words so poetically express the precious touch, the shared encouragement, the daily overwhelming struggle with a dash of humor and a tender acknowledgement of dear friendship. Excellent! I like it very well, to say the least.

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Jenny Gordon 15 February 2011

You sweetheart! You are honored? You are too kind to wee nobody me! Marvelissimo, thus graciously honored, please accept my sincerest thanks, I never dreamed....you're too sweet! It is very tender, realistic, poetic, and poignant with a delightful touch of humor! I am unworthy...thank you so very much! This is an excellent tribute to the joys of PH where folk from all over make friends commenting on each other's cogitations, thus sharing and touching hearts unseen, through simple kindness in our shared passion. Lovely! Your words so poetically express the precious touch, the shared encouragement, the daily overwhelming struggle with a dash of humor and a tender acknowledgement of dear friendship. Excellent! I like it very well, to say the least.

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Jenny Gordon 13 February 2011

You sweetheart! You are honored? You are too kind to wee nobody me! Marvelissimo, thus graciously honored, please accept my sincerest thanks, I never dreamed....you're too sweet! It is very tender, realistic, poetic, and poignant with a delightful touch of humor! I am unworthy...thank you so very much! This is an excellent tribute to the joys of PH where folk from all over make friends commenting on each other's cogitations, thus sharing and touching hearts unseen, through simple kindness in our shared passion. Lovely! Your words so poetically express the precious touch, the shared encouragement, the daily overwhelming struggle with a dash of humor and a tender acknowledgement of dear friendship. Excellent! This is beautiful. I like it very well, ....to say the least.

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