Kavita 22 - When You Are Not With Me Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
Kavita 22 - When You Are Not With Me
When you are not with me, nothing makes me feel good
No face worth noticing, and I feel nothing is real
What I have been telling you, you may not like at all
When you are not with me, nothing makes me feel good.
Lovely poem..Nothing is good without the presence of loved one's Absence makes the heart grow fonder.
beautiful love poem, with the acceptance of failure, that you will not like it if you know.. but I am telling you.
Thank you for the translation of this poem by Kavita Singh- you are so very kind to share these gems in English... I am particularly enamored by the way the poet used the first line as the last line too- -When you are not with me, nothing makes me feel good. Thank you, dear friend!
Hi Susan, As I have written often, Kavita is a very talented poet. It is the beauty of her original that has made this one lovable to you. Thank you Susan. I shall communicate your appreciation to Kavita. And your words, you know Susan, mean a lot to me. Obliged.
Such a heart felt write, you can feel it as you read a long your words. nicely penned. Annette
Hi Annette, Thank you for reading this beautiful poem Ms Kavita Singh. By the by, the word Kavita means POETRY in many Indian languages, including Malayalam, my mother tongue. And thanks for the very learned comments. Deeply obliged Annette....
Heart throabs grab our happiness giving Just pain to gain.....Fine emotions good job poet
Thank you Bharati. I shall convey your good words to Kavita. Sure, her poems are really beautiful.
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When you are not with me, nothing makes me feel good No face worth noticing, and I feel nothing is real - - - - - - - - The feeling of sweet pain experienced when one's beloved is not around is so nicely penned through a few lines.Though it is a translation from Hindi, it is as creative as the original.Thanks for sharing.