Keep Living Poem by Jahan Zeb

Keep Living

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We were different yet not
Two souls sailing in the same boat
By the looks of your pale face
Surely none waiting you on the shore
As I was traveling without destination
I knew thy heart as it were in chest mine
Looking back with eyes wet at the shore left
I wished the journey prolonged
You wished it to have no end
Disparity of fate we both received
By unfair luck were we both deceived
On mercy of wind was voyage ours
Who cared? I neither you
Indifferent were waves of sea
Stayed all still, seriously silent
Conspiracy! In heart of ocean
Against we two, I sensed
The waves rose like a hill of water
The fearful sight got us close
Kept a tight grip on my hand
And placed your head on shoulder mine
Two broken hearts had glimpse of hope
The waves eased, the fear ceased

Two souls sailing in the same boat
Now were each others' destinies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 26 December 2012

ahh....i think you should leave your job of teaching and write some meaningfulness romantic songs for us..cause at least then we'll know the real meaning of love......cause whenever i read your piece i feel like i am reading some ancient write which never can be wrong beautiful poem sir, i am giving a standing ovation....bravo love payal

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2012

I am so lost in these lines, so beautiful poem you made Jahan, or Jehan haha..sweetly made! ! it was an inspirational write to me, and it kinda remind an artwork i shared you called a soul of two trees...now i have to check next chapter, Keep Living part 2, what a homework you gave me hahaha_Soul

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Kanav Justa 29 December 2012

That was very creative...like unwritten soul i too was lost in the poem

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Poetheart Morgan 13 January 2013

It is only the beginning! ! ! ! Has much more for comes! ! ! ! You are a Pandora Box, Poet! ! !

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Poetheart Morgan 13 January 2013

It is only the beginning! ! ! ! Has much more for comes! ! ! ! You are a Pandora Box, Poet! ! !

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Stevie Taite 10 January 2013

This works so well in prose! Paints such hope and romance! X

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Sallam Yassin 08 January 2013

wonderful and so great ur creative soul this voyage of two soul

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Hazel Durham 30 December 2012

What a wonderful voyage of renewed hope and love for two broken hearts, so brilliantly written!

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Malakand Pakistan
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