Keep Walking Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Keep Walking

Rating: 5.0


I don't know whether
The path I am treading will
Take me to my goal
Or I will be lost in some
Wilderness and stay alone
Caressing a bruised soul

I don't know whether
I will see sunshine at the
End of the tunnel and feel joy
Or there will be darkness
Without moon and stars and
In desperation I will die

But I am born to keep
Walking in the path that is
Strewn with thorns and roses
My deeds will give me
What I deserve at the end; a heap
Of blames or lots of praises

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 17 August 2022

I'll take the roses WITHOUT thorns, please. Each of us may 'deserve' some of each, praise and blame. : ) bri

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Ruta Mohapatra 17 August 2022

Karma...age old wisdom...nicely captured...

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 16 August 2022

A poem on life.Very nicely penned.

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Jayne Louise Davies 16 August 2022

Love this! Well done and thank you for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 August 2022

Heartfelt gratitude dear poetess.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 August 2022

Absolutely right is your concluding last line, times ago I wrote a poem titled KEEP MOVING that was about my belief, but you create here the true finest truth in life, heart touching poem deserves 5 Stars TOP Score

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 August 2022

I am humbled. Thanks for beautiful comment.

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