Kingdom Come Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Kingdom Come

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Kingdom come means next world or world after death,
Kings or kindred are equal here remain without breath.
Kingpin has no power here, remains in soul without body,
Kindling burns the body after death or it becomes muddy.

Kinsfolk can't imagine about kingdom come there,
Keenly they want to know, is good result got in fair?
Karma or action plays a vital role in birth or rebirth,
Kaput body doesn't go with soul it mingles in earth.

Keep down your greediness, lust, violence and anger,
Keep your hand in righteous deeds these will linger.
Keep in mind that soul takes rebirth in kingdom come,
King or queen the soul may be lame, beggar or dumb.

Karma or past action brings the soul to a position,
Kindly meditate God and get good suggestion.

Saturday, July 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: social,spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poet’s Note about the Poem
Poet here describes about the world after death. Here there is no power of kings or kindred. Here all are equal means all will remain in soul having no body for some days. Then the souls take rebirth as per their past actions or karmas. This body, in this earth, will be mingled or will be burnt. Kinsfolk can’t imagine about the kingdom come what will be happen there. Here karma or action plays a vital role. As per karma a soul takes birth in rich family or poor family. “Keep down your greediness, lust, violence and anger to remain good in kingdom come. Keep yourselves in righteousness. A soul may get birth as a king, a queen or a lame, beggar or dumb. Karma or past action brings a soul to a good position or bad position as per the work done by the person. So please, meditate God and receive good suggestion”, says the poet. This is the theme of the poem in nutshell. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and is dedicated to the people of the world.

Glossary
Kingdom come - next world/world after death
Kindred - blood relationship
Kingpin – indispensable person
Kindling - burning stick
Kaput - dead
Keep down - restrain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 11 July 2015

I do not know what to believe in as far as an afterlife is concerned, but I do believe in using this life to be kind and compassionate and helping others. An excellent and instructional poem my friend. Peace

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Mj Lemon 11 July 2015

Such a magnificent work. There may be equality in the hereafter, but that may not preclude judgment...A great poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 July 2015

O.K, dear Kelly, you believe in using this life to be kindness, compassionate and helping other. This is good resolve and it will go with soul to next birth. Many thanks for your valuable comment.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 July 2015

the kingdom is used in different fold to teach the readers to follow the right path...well done

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 11 July 2015

Karma is the factor that rules the humans.Loved reading the poem

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Pushpendra Patel 12 February 2019

Coming of kingdom with love and beauty has power of attraction. This poem is really an interesting poem you have well written.

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Michael Walker 10 April 2017

Thanks for sharing this sonnet with us. I like the repetition of words beginning with 'K' at the start of each line, giving the whole poem more power. You show how important karma is in your country.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 April 2017

A vital role! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2016

picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xGreat write.Enjoyed reading it very much 11 Jul 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xSo deep, Sir. 28 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply

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Akhtar Jawad 28 July 2015

Another wonderful poem with a great message, another poem in which every line starts with the same letter............10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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