Kelvin Owusu

Rookie - 134 Points (15-10-1988 / Ghana)

Know You (No Love Found) - Poem by Kelvin Owusu

Foolish was I to keep wanting more
point blank she shot me
tinman I am as I've become heartless
bang bang that thunderous sound again
murder murder like a vulture
she watches with a smile as i bleed out.

Comments about Know You (No Love Found) by Kelvin Owusu

  • Heather Wilson (2/7/2013 12:54:00 PM)

    A heartfelt write, she was evil, pure evil Kelvin, hope you have found better. (Report) Reply

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  • Neela Nath Das (1/25/2013 6:46:00 AM)

    A unique confession! Right you are! At first, one should know more about one's loved ones then can demand. Superb piece! (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (1/23/2013 1:48:00 PM)

    Sad, bleeding heart - another nice write Kelvin. (Report) Reply

  • Stevie Taite (1/23/2013 6:21:00 AM)

    She sounds horrid! You sound a little indifferent, she sounds like she will want to come back for more but you have hardened to her. Got confused with murder murder like a vulture as they are scavengers, so I enter preyed that as been ing your foolishness had your hand on that gun, a struggle......: x x (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 23, 2013

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