Lie, Love Me Poem by Kelvin Owusu

Lie, Love Me

Rating: 5.0

If I fall, will you catch me?
If I were to drown, will you
dive in after me?
Cpr, will you give me the kiss of life?
What about a tear drop, will you share a few
if I didn't make it?
Could you not lie to me or hurt me,
if I asked to you to tell me the truth?
Could you love me even though you don't
Could you, without false advertising?

A lie in a love, a love in a lie
kill me softly with a gentle lies kiss
lay me on a bed of bricks
long as you lie with me
you could lie to me, blind me
hurt me, back stab, emotionally scar me
long as you tell me you love me,
even if you don't
lie to me to sleeps comfort bed
As long as you lie, love me.

The idea to write this piece came to me when a friend lied about bringing me food.
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 05 November 2012

at least say to me a lie, you care for me with no lies, let me live in that lie, let your heart to say that lie. Kelvin! very interesting! 10 for you!

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Anita Sehgal 05 November 2012

what is a lie or two between the love of friends... well written!

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 06 November 2012

This is the power of love, when you hear it, mean when we hear the word love from the person that we love, yeah, the the lies will turn in truth, darkness will turn in light, then, the world is brighter to live a very nice poem well done

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Stevens Cadet 07 January 2013

Romantic and true. Many people would accept being lied too for the sake of love. Find your meaning. Spread true love. Unconditional

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 10 November 2012

Very romantic finding the line between loving and lying. Lying the person one loves is hurting... is stabbing like a betrayal kiss... Delightful read...

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Valerie Dohren 08 November 2012

A nice write, perhaps reflecting the notion that it is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

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Nader Baheri 07 November 2012

nicely penned.some people accept lie in love but some dont.maybe it is the highest point of a true love.when someone says love me if you really do not or as long as you lie, love cheers~nb

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Alexandria Angel 06 November 2012

i love this poem it became my favorite. Good Write

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