Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Lacrimosa Comments

Rating: 5.0

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I saw the teardrops in their eyes
Which filled my saddened heart with pain
I pray sweet children, through all time,
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Valerie Dohren
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Meena Mustafa 07 May 2015

Such a beautiful poem. Loved it. Thanks for sharing :)

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Mary Forrester 04 March 2013

Such a beautiful poem Valerie

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 August 2012

Beautifully clever.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 14 August 2012

a good poem on pain and tears, but why do the angels have the tears and these tears are visualized as the stars.. Universe, full of tears! feel very sad when reading this poem!

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Danny Draper 14 August 2012

A beautiful piece and so much sadness well considered and heartfelt. We like this poem, live in hope.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 12 August 2012

Ah, my latin is almost as poor as my French, and gaelic thgese days...however, if my foreign lingual memory serves me semi-correctly...I believe your title en anglais is, 'Weeping'...And the accompanying work is Primo Simpatico, young lass! And I concur with my buddy, Bob, below, as this is my kind of poetry as well! ~FjR~

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Kevin Halls 12 August 2012

Just read all your latest poems Val and they just get better and better. If the Olympics had poetry as an event you would be getting Gold medals galore! Keep them coming.

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Robert Wynn 11 August 2012

My kinda reading here, so sweet

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Captain Cur 10 August 2012

This poem slowly built with each sensitive well crafted verse to a spectacular uplifting ending. Great write, enjoyed reading this very much. You are one of a kind, Val.

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Valsa George 09 August 2012

Val, what an ardent prayer! ! As usual another treat! ! !

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Romeo Della Valle 09 August 2012

I can see vividly those tears rolling down those weary eyes turning into a long river of pain and suffering! Sad but touching and powerful! A great write that clearly shows your talent and sense of concern for the human race, dear Val! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City

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Heather Wilson 07 August 2012

Wonderful writing Val, .... so sad and heartfelt...., there is so many tears, if only all in gladness could be reborn... a lovely thought. Thinking of you and yours.

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Joseph Anderson 07 August 2012

Val- can we ever hope for a better tomorrow? Your retelling of this never ending crisis was profound and disturbing

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Dave Walker 07 August 2012

So right, so many tears. A really fantastic poem.

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