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I saw the teardrops in their eyes
Which filled my saddened heart with pain
I pray sweet children, through all time,
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a good poem on pain and tears, but why do the angels have the tears and these tears are visualized as the stars.. Universe, full of tears! feel very sad when reading this poem!
A beautiful piece and so much sadness well considered and heartfelt. We like this poem, live in hope.
Ah, my latin is almost as poor as my French, and gaelic thgese days...however, if my foreign lingual memory serves me semi-correctly...I believe your title en anglais is, 'Weeping'...And the accompanying work is Primo Simpatico, young lass! And I concur with my buddy, Bob, below, as this is my kind of poetry as well! ~FjR~
Just read all your latest poems Val and they just get better and better. If the Olympics had poetry as an event you would be getting Gold medals galore! Keep them coming.
This poem slowly built with each sensitive well crafted verse to a spectacular uplifting ending. Great write, enjoyed reading this very much. You are one of a kind, Val.
I can see vividly those tears rolling down those weary eyes turning into a long river of pain and suffering! Sad but touching and powerful! A great write that clearly shows your talent and sense of concern for the human race, dear Val! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City
Wonderful writing Val, .... so sad and heartfelt...., there is so many tears, if only all in gladness could be reborn... a lovely thought. Thinking of you and yours.
Val- can we ever hope for a better tomorrow? Your retelling of this never ending crisis was profound and disturbing
Such a beautiful poem. Loved it. Thanks for sharing :)