Last Light Poem by Sandra Fowler

Last Light

Rating: 4.9


Blue wind upon a distant windowpane,
I hear you whistle folk songs to the rain
In tune with leaves that have no place to go.
Last light becomes the only home they know.

My friend, I feel your hand upon my skin.
The essence of the mood is paper thin.
Against the awesome turning of the earth,
Warmth has about a cup of coffee's worth.

Previously published, 'Poetry Depth Quarterly'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Warm, comely expression of passion...And, as with all your work...this too is yet another breathtaker. ~ FjR ~

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Will Barber 08 March 2008

Two quatrains here, contain such meaning, and so many sensual elements - sound, sight, touch - then the taste and scent of coffee enfold the senses. Truly, the sweetest moments we know on Earth are defined by moments savored one by one, but memory oft has to serves as proxy. The length of time a cup of coffee may retain its heat is universe enough.

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Fred Babbin 01 December 2007

Your closing stanza leaves me dumbstruck.

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Ivor Hogg 04 August 2007

Your opening stanza leaves me dumbstruck

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Sandra - What are we in comparison to the indestructible world around us, just a cup of coffee's worth. At least a little warmth is something! Thank you for this! Cheryl

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 October 2022

Sandra, this is a brilliant poem. Appreciated. Top score and to my favourite! !

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Sonya Florentino 18 June 2009

the dying light, the enroaching chill.... love the last line especially....

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Vaibhav Pandey 06 April 2009

beautiful poem ma'm....your poems never disappoint....10

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, aryaindia 08 September 2008

Unearthly charm in your precious writes gives a feel of worthiness to your excellent quill. God's blessings on you ever. arya.

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C. P. Sharma 06 September 2008

You are a great metaphyscal poet, can compare with Donne The last and the last and the last lightpost, Still don't know where is the Ghost! Your imagery here is comparable to that of Eliot.

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Sandra Fowler

Sandra Fowler

W. Columbia, WV, USA
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