Last Night

Rating: 3.3

Last
night
thin
rain,
gusty
wind.

Dense
sleep
doesn't
fade
a wine
hangover.

I'm talking
to her
who
rolled up
the curtains.

Are you
blind!
I
say.

By now
they're
fat
green
and skimpy
red.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 16 December 2015

Nice poem...Loved it.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 July 2017

Reminds me of the movie ABOUT LAST NIGHT.... Thanks for posting??

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Rajnish Manga 13 July 2017

Lovely expression and a nicely crafted poem. Thanks.

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A. Madhavan 13 July 2017

Comment in one word once and allude to any season.

1 3 Reply
Paul Brookes 13 July 2017

This 12th Century poet still holds truth even after 1000 year the Human experience changes little not its stupidity of drinking too much wine great poem from an ancient master

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2019

Inscription of last night is so haunting and attractive. A beautiful poem by Li Ching Chao is well executed.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 July 2018

fine poem with original notes. tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 July 2018

A nice poem written with a sweet style. Enjoyed.

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Adrian Flett 13 July 2018

A familiar feeling long on style, short on words.

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 July 2018

nice style of writing- Huh- last night no light in dark at bed park was silence you or me at grey eyed no romance no sense but in best friend give the dawn in my mind O my love leave all flirt! ///////// just ........!

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