Leaf Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Leaf

Rating: 4.3


I breathe,
the scorching struggle and spiny pain
stabbing
on my green soul
for making shadow
to so many
resting
under my
tree.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 11 October 2011

A good poem couched with simplicity. You will enjoy similar thoughts in mine - Trees - Adeline

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Dead Leaf 08 October 2011

short but too good..i like it very much

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 08 October 2011

This is very inspiring. I like this poem.

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Andrew Blakemore 07 October 2011

A really nice perspective upon the life of a leaf. great verse.

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Dave Walker 07 October 2011

Really beautiful poem, small but so big. Great poem, great write.

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Harindhar Reddy 01 November 2011

Simply outstanding lines of verse are used here. Scarcely we come across this kind estimable stuff. It is short so what it is very sweet. May so much thought is told in a very few words. Words are used scanty Yet the effect on the mind reader is deep................ A great poem by a Baronial poet. If gotta grade the poem - A1 is the rating. Hello friend bye for now.............

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Allemagne Roßmann 18 October 2011

The leaflets that led to its free flowing heartfelt ideas are of enormous energy-they have in them the sun since their photosynthesis but they do not express their griefs as they have the tenacity and capability like the sun who has since dawn decided our trigonometric days and nights-but nights as per life`s anecdotes are more than the weight of a day so craved for.In another form its dishappiness in proportion to happiness.In some other forms, some other annotations.Delineated beautifully.

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Ken E Hall 15 October 2011

The provider of cool shade, short and says a lot gently...regards

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Louis Cecile 15 October 2011

I quite liked the ending sentiments of your poem, both warming and haunting. Certainly a lot to expand on here as a theme.

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Lenore Lee 12 October 2011

Quick but straight to the point. I enjoyed reading it very much.

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