Lear, And Darwin Poem by Will Barber

Lear, And Darwin

Rating: 5.0


The raindrops pound upon the nerves
The winds howl stringently, and sing
A song to fill a winter night, a surge
Of rage against a bitter fate, a king
Who wanders in the blustry snows
Naked to the icy blows.

Never, never, weep for Man.
Refuse all pity, for the pain
That drives him from his native home
Is driven by an urgent drum;
And those who try to save the race
Doom other species in its place.

Deride the dreams of childish ones
Who sing of hope in future times:
Look around, and praise the hours
That toll indifferently to a close.

Then weep a bit, and realise
These are the universal rules.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sean North 20 February 2007

DaMm FiNE woRk MY LiEgE, Ur HeaRt hAS GRoWn WinGs, u LeaDEr Of The EvOLutiOn u....... love the toll bit a lot, like a price we pay to pLAy KinG.. aWsome woRk mR WiLLLLLLLL

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Not a member No 4 12 February 2007

We grow thinking our fate lies in our own hands as individuals and for the race. But we learn, and it's not a cynical process. The major determining factors are beyond us it seems, and should we take steps that appear to us to accelerate the end then perhaps we fall victim to the delusion again. So, no blame? ? Or do we have just enough - perhaps untraceable - free will to steer this ship safely through some of the storms that the evolution of life and the universe have lying in wait, to extend and enhance our stay. And thereby imply that failure is culpable? ! Or by taking any elective steps for betterment/salvation do we suffer Lear's fate? You imply no free will, Will! I would argue we have enough to give us scope for hope, and for fear, but I'm damned if can argue a convincing case for it. I simply cannot get real traction on it! An unfalsifiable argument on both sides I think. My guess is that your predicted outcome will be correct either way. Great and deeply stimulating, though perhaps appropriately bleak content, expressed with superb poetic skill as always. Excellent use of partial rhymes! No visible stress at all! Loved this. jim

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James James 11 February 2007

Love this Will. We are merely driving someone else's bus!

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Robert Howard 11 February 2007

What a shame that the same mental power that allows us to bend the world for sustenance, health or shelter also reveals our mortality.

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Robert Howard 11 February 2007

You have tied this all together beautifully. What a shame that the same mental power that allows us to bend the world for sustenance, health or shelter reveals us our mortality.

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Brian Dorn 29 October 2007

This 'rules' in my opinion... a 'universal' masterpiece! Absolutely superb by every measure... a brilliant piece of poetry.

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Zen Bojczuk 12 June 2007

Darn Will... you ARE good. Zen

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Raveendran . 07 June 2007

Beautiful interplay of sensory and abstract images to say never, never, never

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Emma Johnson 22 May 2007

And those who try to save the race Doom other species in its place. These will be memorable lines for years to come, Will. Very reflective of what has been haunting your heart and mind, what has absented you from the web. We're patiently awaiting your return, a new surge of compassionate pieces. A wonderful poem. Susie xx.

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Will. I won't add to the entirely accurate approbations below, save to say that this is an absolute stunner. t x

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