One Hopes Poem by Will Barber

One Hopes

Rating: 4.6


I am old enough to remember
So many things, so many things:

The blackbirds singing in the morning,
Cicadas taking wing,

The scent of thunderstorms,
The yellow-jacket's sting.

So much we leave behind, so much
Is fastened to us, unwilling;

Yet as the years advance, we learn that
Urgently we must sing

Of morning and the noon-hour,
Green, sacred evening.

May Time dole out some mercy,
To the young, as we are leaving.

- 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Carefully, flowingly composed Will... the structure and the content. You are, of course, not going anywhere. t xxx

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Duncan Wyllie 11 February 2008

Stick around WILL the world needs the likes of you around, Oh you think I joke I never joke about something so serious , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , YOU'RE A STAR>>>>>>>>>> Love duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 11 February 2008

Bittersweet, lyrical and poignant. For you, Will, may the music never end. Lovely work, Affectionately, Sandra

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Sean North 11 February 2008

2001 out of 10 is what hal has informed me.....MR WiLL

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Esther Leclerc 15 February 2008

Lovely and real... my favorite kind of poem. Sing on, friend Will. Always and ever!

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delilah contrapunctal 26 March 2008

Dear Will The beauty of your words......empathy, compassion amd joy.....a lovely poet, you, as well as a lovely human being.....thankyou for your song...! ! Love, D.

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Greenwolfe 1962 08 March 2008

Yes, yes. I thought so. Greenwolfe 1962

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Brian Dorn 24 February 2008

Brilliantly stated. Marked with a (Will) ful and caring attitude. Great as always!

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MCKENZi : ] 22 February 2008

this poem just reminds me that materialistic things in this world dont matter because thats not what were gonna remember when were old. : ] gorgeous poem. i really like it.

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Not a member No 4 22 February 2008

It reeks so bittersweetly of the things that should matter to us in the end Will, and it does it with such grace, style, economy, hard earned piercing simplicity, and profound compassion. Gorgeous. jim

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