Leave Lazy Fate Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Leave Lazy Fate

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aim
befriends
clock of lucks
detaining goal

efficient dream can
foreshow the improvement
gracefully, if true effort
hails perseverance time labor

if aim damaged by effortless work
jesting of jilt belches the bitterness
builds asylum hut into marrow of bone
laughs upon paralyzed and hypnosis sleeper

manna was food of tale for the lazy believer
now, none can expect livelihood without hard work in time
opulence lives in the kingdom of painstaking industry
procrastination- formidable blood sucker of diligent

qualm in insatiate stirred labor treads stamina to be back
ready-witted if stuff dreamy wisdom in mind without activation
synthetic disappointment comes with trickery ego- "I'm the great only! "
termite of indolence cuts bone of determination unsubstantial showcase

unsymmetrical labor with practical life never can arrive at expected aim
voyager in the boisterous sea knows how crudity etiquette the blue calm seas have
waive wailing past, so; awake, walk-out every present, if not, itchy feet on dream drag back
x-ray can't discover the reason of backwardness of entrepreneur, wretchedness wrecks the all

yester night's dream if brings activated hand of today- radar of practical life beat can grasp aim
zigzag life can enjoy the highest glory if dream leave the lazy mysterious fate and dependence


-January 12,2019 Chattogram

Sunday, January 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: goal,dream
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
abecedarian and syllabic form (a+b+c+d+e+.......+z and 1+2+3+4+5+......+26)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 January 2019

NICE VERY NICE MY BD FRIEND YOU HAVE A COMMAND OVER ENGLISH WELL DONE KEEP THE SHIP SAILING don't mind caps I am half blind

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 January 2019

Strain! ! Detaining goal! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 January 2019

efficient dream can foreshow the improvement gracefully, if true effort hails perseverance time labor....pragmatic expression! Excellent work....10

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