Leave The Way Of Violence Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Leave The Way Of Violence

Rating: 5.0


Oh dear man,
You are named in many female names,
And we know that you exist here,
You are writing from many names
And you are doing poetic politics here,
You have bad intention to defame good poets.
But, you remember,
You will never get success in your bad action.

It is better for you to leave the way of violence.
You should surrender before God
And you should feel peace.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,30 July 2020. All rights reserved.

Thursday, July 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: social behaviour,violence,war and peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 31 July 2020

Violence in any form should be condemned and you did rightly so via this poem. Hope the one for whom you wrote this poem will understand it. Nicely thought poem. 10++

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 August 2020

Wicked heart of a man living among us as a poet! ! We better watch out! ! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 July 2020

Feeling peace should be our ambition. This poem is very brilliantly and amazingly penned by self.

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very nice.. good poetry.. clear 10 dear The poetical violence Friday,31st July 2020 this is a holy and sacred field where one holds the position in the reader's eye let anyone desperately try to defame Dr. Jadia Hasmukh

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Rajnish Manga 30 July 2020

This is a noble forum of literary minds and should never be used to settle personal scores. Let us pursue our goal in an atmosphere of goodwill without ill-will towards anybody.

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Lyn Paul 13 August 2020

War in this world has never stopped through greed and power. Mr Trump fights for power also for himself only. PH is a place for adults who get joy in reading others work and expressing their words. The war here needs to stop. We teach our children not to bully.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 August 2020

You should surrender before God And you should feel peace, Exactly Peace. Amen.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 August 2020

2) I have read and seen so many new female names, but they come and go but never stay. Are they only roaming or have they a home of their own? I am afraid to talk to strangers, Sir! For this gorgeous and poem full of Brilliance, I put here a Full Score 10. God Bless YOU and your beloved family, dear Respected Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir! Your impressive words thought-provoking a bit I repeat here: It is better for you to leave the way of violence.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 August 2020

Before God we must show repentance, surrender and ask for forgivenness to those are done much grief and much much pain. These are difficult times for the sinner, so true. Your poems is very thought-provoking, dear Respected Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir.

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 August 2020

A very nice advice to the crooks whose only motive is to defame others. I don't know what do they achieve from this. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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