Let me see inside of YOUR beautiful
For the love you've given me
is quite the miracle
You're the one, who took this one,
To bright, from blue
And showed me everyday
was beautiful...
When it seems at times,
the world forgot my face
And each room I entered into,
became, but, a lonely place
Tried erasing all the hardships,
that I'd been through...
Then you reach on in,
And bring me back...
To beautiful
Let me see inside of YOUR beautiful
For the love you've given me,
is, but, a miracle
You're the one, who took this one,
Without a clue...
To a new perspective point of view
Of beautiful....
When the seasons change,
and they do, each spring and fall
Well...there's been times I think, I thought
I'd lost it all
I was stuck inside my simple sort
of solitude...
Then you return me back
To beautiful...
Comes a time, I know,
my hair, to gray...
There's one thing I hope for
And for this I pray
That my friends remain,
In loyalty, and plentitude
By God's own grace, and goodness,
Beautiful...
Let me see inside of YOUR beautiful
For the love you've blessed me with,
So great, it's magnitude..
You're the ones, who taught this one
I know it's true...
And you've returned my thoughts
To beautiful...
I'll Let you see inside of MY beautiful
For the love I feel for you...
It's immeasurable...
I'm the one, who loves
each one of you,
Through and through...
And I believe you, each,
Are beautiful...
Come let's share tonight...
With stars and sweet moonlight...
'Cause everything alright...
Just B. E. A. U. T. I. F. U. L.
i liked the flow. and thanks for the poem note. in the lines: You've the ones, who taught this one I know it's true... did you mean you'Re the ones....? i esp. enjoyed That my friends remain, In loyalty, and plentitude i didn't think you were making reference to 'physical' beauty (despite some reference to gray hair...which can be beautiful....i'm an example!) . but it sounds as though two previous readers were thinking that. as for lyn paul's comment about 'beauty is only skin deep'...i've heard that before and i think it can be taken in two ways. physical beauty (perceived differently by different people) can be on the outermost layer of a person...going only as deep as the skin, sort of. OR spiritual/emotional/mental beauty can be just below the skin (in the depths below the skin) . thanks for sharing. :) peace back at ya!
A beautiful write Susan and beauty is only skin deep. Thank you for your great Poet Notes.
much appreciate the underlying thoughts of the poem. appearances are oftener than not deceptive.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A sweet rendering of pure love and emotion... My complements to you! ... with applause to you dear poet., a standing ovation... for your wisdom in acknowledgement and your dedication to life's greatest treasures... family and friends.