Seema Aarella

Rookie - 82 Points (19 Mar 1979 / KGF, India)

# Let Me Tell You My Dreams...! - Poem by Seema Aarella

Neither heaven nor earth
Rim of both worlds
What it typically seems…
On the vertex of
The towering hill
Let me tell you my dreams…


Neither night nor day
When dew drops melt
And flow as glib streams…
Under the drape of
Such blossomed canopy
Let me tell you my dreams…


Neither love nor hate
An intense feel
Of both varied extremes…
When you look deep
In my brooding eyes
Let me tell you my dreams…


Neither life nor death
I am caught in between
And my desolate heart screams…
When you touch and
Revive my very being
Let me tell you my dreams…


Comments about # Let Me Tell You My Dreams...! by Seema Aarella

  • Rm. Shanmugam ChettiarRm. Shanmugam Chettiar (10/12/2008 1:02:00 AM)

    Fantastically feelings of love is brought out. Cheears (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (10/4/2008 1:01:00 PM)

    'Neither life nor death
    I am caught in between
    And my desolate heart screams…
    When you touch and
    Revive my very being
    Let me tell you my dreams…'

    A lovely piece on dream. Feeling dreamy.
    10+
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  • Anjali Sinha (10/4/2008 1:39:00 AM)

    dreams dreams dreams! ! ! ! !
    Under the drape of
    Such blossomed canopy
    all i do is dream dream dream
    fine composition
    ++10 regards anjalie
    (do read my poems)
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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (10/3/2008 7:44:00 AM)

    Let me tell you my dreams.............when the earth starts singing, inhabitants are the orchestra, that's the day i'd have a pleasant sleep! (Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (10/3/2008 5:59:00 AM)

    fine composition with fine rythm............10 (Report)Reply

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  • Reshma Ramesh (10/3/2008 5:55:00 AM)

    wow........thought provoking poem (Report)Reply

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  • premji premjipremji premji (10/3/2008 5:46:00 AM)

    i read your poem sitting on the thin wall separating life and death... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 3, 2008



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