Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 685,091 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Let No One Think Here - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Let no one
Sunday,19th May 2019

let no one guide you
and compel to pass through
the ordeal that is false
and make you tense

why people should bother?
and offer
false promises
and even curses

you are not meant for it
and so they greet
to fool and deceive
you now know about them

let no one dictate
and state
that you are an easy target
so pounce on him and get

you show no discomfiture
at people's unkind gesture
but take the course
that is forceful

this makes your position
not vulnerable but lays a foundation
with a firm commitment
towards improvement

Hasmukh Mehta

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/21/2019 4:38:00 AM)

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  • Drtony Brahmin (5/20/2019 8:42:00 PM)

    this makes your position
    not vulnerable but lays a foundation
    with a firm commitment
    towards improvement thinking about the society and how one shall behave. a fine poem dear Hasmukh. Tony
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  • Jankovic Zoran (5/20/2019 1:07:00 PM)

    Instructive poem. Good words play. Congratulations to POD. (Report)Reply

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  • Anil Kumar Panda (5/20/2019 12:02:00 PM)

    Great words of wisdom that give message that living in peace and harmony is the best way to growth. Nice poem indeed. Congrats. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/20/2019 11:29:00 AM)

    Insightful poem Hasmukh. I will keep this one in mind forever. Also, congrats on this poem chosen as 'POD'. (Report)Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (5/20/2019 10:54:00 AM)

    CONGRATULATIONS being chosen again as the Member Poem Of The Day THRICE, WOW an honourable prize.
    THRICE close to each other concerning the dates, you deserved this so well, dear Hasmukh Sir! . God Bless You in Abundance together with your beloved family. I immediately agree with your wise words in this amazing poetry.10
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/20/2019 10:06:00 AM)

    Seek always for the works of the truth and live in peace with your neighbours.

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Savita Tyagi (5/20/2019 8:16:00 AM)

    Words of wisdom that shine through years of experience, written forcefully and with clarity in a lovely poem. Gongratulations! (Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab Bangalee (5/20/2019 4:26:00 AM)

    you show no discomfiture
    at people's unkind gesture
    but take the course
    that is forceful..../// overall great writings
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (5/20/2019 4:20:00 AM)

    CONGRATULATIONS! ONCE AGAIN congratulations dear Great Poet! We are glad seeing three of your poems as Poem of the Day within closer dates. This is a very lovely poem beautifully penned. No one can compel us as we have our own freedom. Own foundation makes respectable own position. An excellent poem is shared...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (5/20/2019 3:57:00 AM)

    A poem with a strong message that is true. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/20/2019 3:03:00 AM)

    welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/20/2019 3:03:00 AM)

    welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/20/2019 3:02:00 AM)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/20/2019 3:00:00 AM)

    welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/20/2019 2:59:00 AM)

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 19, 2019



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