Let Winter Snowflakes Fall In Summer Poem by Savita Tyagi

Let Winter Snowflakes Fall In Summer

Rating: 5.0


Once in a while let the imagination run wild
Next to being silly it is the best solution
For an Imprisoned soul's nifty restitution.

Let your mind take the flights of sonic boom
Upon the purple fancy's plumage gaudy.
From the narrow confines of human body

Let Big Bang splash rays of violet
Upon the world of its own making
To grow mushrooms for rainbow hacking.

Brew your coffee under lightning while
Moon hides and giggles under sheets
And stars run to tingle the ivory ceiling.

Let winter snowflakes fall in summer
And sorrow's lava extinguish the ocean
In the game of life be a whimsical runner.

Best of all write for fun with no need to rhyme
And no need to excogitate
Let your mind be free and out of cage.

5.29.2018

Friday, June 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: imagination
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 01 June 2018

Out of the cage! ! On stage with your sage; Let your mind be free. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Edmund Strolis 05 June 2018

A whimsical runner! Exudes liberty and laughing disregard for conformity. You may shock the world with simple appreciation of those things considered mundane by most. Make a splash and escape the cage. Wonderful!

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Irfanulla Shariff 09 July 2018

This poem is a great example of spontaneous visualization. Let your mind be free and out of cage! Great write!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 June 2018

I derive great pleasure reading this beautiful poem! Seems so simple but natural and meaningful with intense poetic depth! My favorite lines: Let winter snowflakes fall in summer/And sorrow's lava extinguish the ocean/In the game of life be a whimsical runner! I vote this beautiful poem with a 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 June 2018

Let winter snowflakes fall in summer And sorrow's lava extinguish the ocean In the game of life be a whimsical runner. Best of all write for fun with no need to rhyme And no need to excogitate Let your mind be free and out of cage........touching expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem has been shared hauntingly. Thanks for posting.

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Indira Renganathan 08 June 2018

The triplet format sounds good, , , , a nice suggestion to set our heart and mind free to write without opting for rhyming words...very adorable poem....10++

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Akhtar Jawad 07 June 2018

Let winter snowflakes fall in summer And sorrow's lava extinguish the ocean In the game of life be a whimsical runner. A nice idea in a nice poem.

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