Lets Dance To The Tune Of Lust
The world says hush
It's not the time to rush
Forget the things which are must
Let's dance to the tune of lust
Common man may feel disgusted
Their manhood has got rusted
So ladies tighten your bust
Blow away the society's curse
Just forget the things which are must
Let's dance to the tune of lust
Blast the society,
Blast the rules
We aren't 21st century fools
Blow out cynical and old fashioned dust
Just forget the things which are must
Let's dance to the tune of lust
Fill environment with moans and groans
Flush out every booming drone
Entice the world with booty and curves
Burst now every man's crust
Forget the things which are must
Lets dance to the tune of lust
Freespirit Juneja
Amazing lines... very well Put down... The Rhymes cover up for even the peculiar syntax.. This is what everyone must learn - to enjoy every minute of their living... Come on Sir! Forget those things which are must - write to the thought of YOUR lust
A nice smoothly flowing poem in tune with the title that is strong in its sentiment. Very playful almost mimicking child like manners. Good work
Really, We know it but like to deny. Very true.Flow? Awesome!
Awesome. Lust is often seen as disgusting and is considered a sin. honestly, ppl should try being lusty for a day. Adding it as one of my favorite poems. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
At first I struggled with the phrase 'the things which are must', but, as I read on and began to enjoy the poem and it's message for it's own sake, the strange sentence construction took on a wonderful meaning of it's own. I now would not change it for the world. I will be honest, I rarely read very many poems of those who ask me to, unsolicited, as they tend to be of dubious grammatical value. Also, I never comment unless I feel the poem is worthy of praise - I do not like to criticise for fear of causing offence or dampening the enthusiasm of a budding poet. I really enjoyed this one. Well written