I Wish I Could Be A Kite Poem by Freespirit Juneja

kite.................beautiful one

I dont want to be propelled i dont want to be controlled I just want to sail in the laminar flow Without any hip hop and without any show, .................... very nice and admirable thought

read 2 times, , great poem, , i can see every word.

I like your poem, I wish i could be a kite very nice interesting poem. While reading I was thinking that I am kite and I am flying in the sky.Keep it up. Now step by step i will read your poems and write good comments on them. Add me as a friend. Pls see my poems as well and I wrote one poem same on the topic of To Touch The Sky is also related on the topic of Kite. I have a big collection on my poems but I posted 6 of them. Pls read my poems & comment on them.

Opening lines are beautiful. Poets like wind and sky now kites Good poem -KAVIN CHARALAN

it has got a charm and light....to be a kite....like the wish every human has wings...

i like this poem the most from all your poems that i have seen so far...in an innocent way and with spontaneous flow of words, the poem is remarkable...it reminds me of one of the first poems i wrote, ' To be a Cloud '..well done.

Wonderful dream, Let us all be a bit more like a kite....

The feeling of freedom. A good poem

Very nice poem...i really love this...this is the best poem..i hv read, written by you....keep up the good work....a poem written in the spirit of william wordsworth....wandering lonely as a cloud....i wish i could be a kite....thanks for sharing+