Freespirit Juneja

Rookie - 3 Points (09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)

Your Beautiful Smile - Poem by Freespirit Juneja

Your Beautiful Smile

Life is a mystical winding
Woven around happy and sad things
It flows like ripples of water
Turned me into perpetual carter
Mirth & peace play games of guile
But I never realized
It's next to me, your beautiful smile

Rarely, blink my eye on odd notion
Life's filled with dreary commotion
Whole year seems concised in a day
My own shadow made me partying bay
Happiness seemed to be so labile
But I never realized,
It's always next to me, your beautiful smile

The Smile
Beautifully unzips around your face
Annihilate griefs without trace
Arouse me to pinnacle of elation
Embraces me this beautiful creation
Melodramatic life made me fragile
Protected and cared by your beautiful smile

Freespirit Juneja

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poet's Notes about The Poem

1st Stanza Life has made the poet so busy that he has forgotten the happiness of his love/ mate 's is next to him of his love/ mate 's

2nd stanza the loneliness has become the friend of the poet and he has forgotten that his happiness is next to him

3rd stanza describes the beauty of the smile and the magic power it confers

Comments about Your Beautiful Smile by Freespirit Juneja

  • (9/17/2012 2:23:00 PM)

    its really nice poem (Report) Reply

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  • (6/12/2012 6:55:00 PM)

    Nice poem i love it well expressed and simply EXCELLENT.......... Guess Who (Report) Reply

  • Urshula Davis (6/7/2012 2:31:00 PM)

    This rocks! Wow how beautiful! I enjoyed the read! (Report) Reply

  • (6/6/2012 10:16:00 AM)

    hey, nice poem, some really great imagery! there are some polysyllabic words that felt a bit out of place but maybe thats just me: D keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Renu Kakkar (6/6/2012 3:28:00 AM)

    A beautifully written poem....i enjoyed reading it (Report) Reply

  • (6/5/2012 2:42:00 PM)

    I LOVE this poem its absolutely brilliant I can tell its well thought out :) (Report) Reply

  • Kasia Fedyk (6/5/2012 2:25:00 PM)

    Seeing Light in a smile radiating from within, beauty revealed. Beautiful poem, I love the way you describe every detail and your observation is sublime. (Report) Reply

  • Suzaku Vaneko (6/5/2012 2:24:00 PM)

    Wow what an sweet beautifully written poem (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (6/5/2012 6:03:00 AM)

    Amidst the lingering tune of sadness of perishable world it's the beautiful smile of ladylove which wipes the grief of the sorrow burdened mind.The smile is thus drawn on the vast canvas of life.Moving. (Report) Reply

  • (4/24/2012 3:05:00 PM)

    am speechless, tis beautiful poetry (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (4/22/2012 1:25:00 PM)

    A reservoir of beautiful and moving words that magically dance in every line of this touching write bringing harmony to the entire script! Well crafted with rich imagery! Wisdom is filtered through your magic pen! 10+++ Thank you for sharing once again and keep it up, young man! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2012 10:06:00 AM)

    It is grand. This is absolutely world class poetry...and I enjoyed reading. Keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2012 10:04:00 AM)

    It grand. This absolutely world class poetry...and I enjoyed reading. Keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (4/20/2012 9:06:00 AM)

    A smile helps the world go around for everyone, a lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • Brianna Winebarger (4/20/2012 7:16:00 AM)

    I smile everytime i read this......really sweet....fantastic.. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (4/18/2012 10:54:00 AM)

    Beautiful smile,
    A beautiful heaven craft was made
    Eternally touch your innocent face
    Shining my darkness like a moon at night
    Warm like every second hit by the day sunlight
    Beautiful smile easy to give but hard to keep
    When you feel bad just a smile
    because it a sign of a heaven made
    .....that is my version :) LOL credit for you as the owner of the original idea_Unwritten Soul
    (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A (4/18/2012 8:27:00 AM)

    A smile that wins the heart is wonderful sign of love to be worshiped! (Report) Reply

  • Parithi Muthurasan (4/17/2012 3:09:00 AM)

    The melodramatic life has made me fragile
    Only to be protected and cared by your beautiful smile...........the power of smiling expressed in your poem
    (Report) Reply

  • Rajendran Muthiah (4/15/2012 6:09:00 PM)

    when the beautiful smile unzips in the face of God's creation, you are aroused to the pinnacle of elation. Being caught into the web of complex life, the smile next to you is realised so late. Wonderful! (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (4/11/2012 8:44:00 AM)

    Smile plays a beautiful role in our life. Smiling face of one's beloved can wipe out the fret of life. Great! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 19, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 24, 2015

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