Let's Make Love Tonight Poem by Marieta Maglas
Let's Make Love Tonight
Let's make love tonight
Until our bodies will transcend their shapes
To become one single corpse.
Let's make this love
Our eternal emotion of dreams
And not just a fleeting dream.
And if we accomplish
Our abyss inside,
We will be like two butterflies
Released from their cocoons
And we will awake
In our novel world of seconds,
Were we will subsist for being eternal..
From: Dona Lil Antonio (Manila Philippines; Female; 29) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/19/2009 12: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: hi ive gone through your poems they were all awesome and written in deep feelings. keep writing and keep inspiring others to make good crafts as well.
The inner philosophy of 'coitus' so well penned, so true.
lovely poem cant belive how well u chose the words to agree with the passion of love 10
Corpse indeed is the word that fully captures the sempiternal divinity of lovemaking encapsulate rather than the manifest temporal indulgence… 10
A amazing poem. You made the reader believe every word. Thank you Marieta for sharing the amazing poetry.
Your poem's title is as nude as rainwater, and the lines that follow offer evidence that your conceptual expectations are bursting with transformative fertility.
I like this poem, it has a dark undertone that I can appreciate. To become one single corpse is a great line and image.
love making so free so full of all that one is...passion...blowing forward...sideways...up..down..stop! ...is not a command...hands move about...knowning not where...what a dare...how care-free is that...you have woke in me...my dreams...dreamt.
Hi Mari - This is beautiful - so gentle and yet so emotive - this is how cerebral (dream) love really works. 'One eternal emotion of dream' a beautiful 'coming together' of lovers - separated by distance but locked together in passion.. Thank you for sharing your thoughts in such an elegant way. It scores a MAX with me! Love you in poetry - JOHN X
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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From: Alan Draper (Braunton, Devon United Kingdom; Male; 54) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/18/2009 9: 17: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Thanks Mari I've read your poems. You have good imagination but the poems are too serious for me. Maybe thats the way in Romania. It does have a sad reputation to us Westerners. I love laughing and challenge you to write a funny poem to make me happy. Lots of luck from your Froggie friend Alan