~ Lie Sly ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Lie Sly ~

Rating: 4.7


~ LIE SLY ~
Ms. Nivedita …
UK
15.10.09.


Life-Hype
Hike-Strife
Pike- Knife
Strike-Slice.

To ply
To tie
Ne’er try
To die
E’er try.

Fie n’ Fie
Death is
Hi-fi
Goodbye hi
Welcome fie.

Love
To die
Else are
Lie Sly

Hue buy
Posthumously dye
Starry psychic sky.

Again why ask: Why?
Smilingly say: Bye bye.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Almedia Knight-Oliver 31 March 2010

A lovely-and interesting- poem. I have to tell you that this poem-and others as well-has a freshness of perception that's strikingly pleasing and your economical usage of language can be mind-boggling and eye-catching.Enjoyed the poem a 10+++ Love,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 February 2010

Love To die Else are Lie Sly ////////////////////shama pe mar jaye parwana.. flies die on light still go after it... that is love dear.. keep smiling... i may follow suit....lovely poem.........10 read mine gay menace.....i miss Note: - some of ph sections are no working here including mange comments

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Allemagne Roßmann 21 February 2010

Love To die Else are Lie Sly................................it happens when a pen becomes digital hand.Robotically well written poem.

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Kranthi Pothineni 28 December 2009

Compact wording but its diction has good impact. Specially liked the ending five lines. Very well crafted.

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Bachha Chakravorty 06 December 2009

‘…Hue buy // Posthumously dye // Starry psychic sky. …’ Yes! ! Poets are always Poet…posthumously they’re in, with, within Poem…splendorous imagination…

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Miroslava Odalovic 15 October 2010

Happy catharsis hopefully to be reached by everyone :)

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I really like the way you present your poems..its unique..its interesting..loved it

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Sally Plumb Plumb 16 June 2010

Aye, aye. Which was the lie?

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Lynn Glover 26 May 2010

cleverly written poem with plenty of oomph. A Good write. Lynn

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Aldo Kraas 25 April 2010

I could see your personality in the poem. You like people that are confident like you. You speak your mind And you want people to speak their mind.

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