~ LIFE DIVINE ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
8 January 2010.
Resign and Consign
Delusion dedoping
Buoyant absolving
Souse dousing
Enjoy Life Divine.
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Stroke of refined emotion ‘Divinity’ in a very cute but resolute way… one has to Resigns [Mundanity] and Consign to Divinity thro’ dedoping …enjoyed Ms. Nivedita…thanks.. 10++
The words used are a bit unfamiliar but the content is expressed well and made to understand. Short and simple expression of life.
Succinct, but meaningful. Each new day is a gift and well worth living.10, for you. Kind regards, Sandra
a short poem very well written, thank you for sharing 10/10
And be bathed in bliss and pure in heart, though there's nothing really to add to the short and much to say of this poem. Just an association.
Sharp, blunt, short and straight fwd. Life is what you make it to be, it leaves you with no one but you to blame or credit to...a layout of your decisions n choices..deep emotional expression lightly described...b'ful write...
life divine is better as always.. we should really enjoy it.... nice write ma'am!
I give ditto to comments of Sr. Poet Ejaj Khan … Short but wide horizon … depth is unfathomable … 10+++ Dr. V
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I fully endorse posts by Sr. Poet Kesav, Lynn and Ravi… Their comments are well addressed to the poem… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK