Lie With Me Poem by Valerie Dohren
Lie With Me
Lie with me
in a golden field of sun-ripened corn
beneath a beckoning sky
We shall listen to the gentle breeze
rising and falling, rising and falling
in sweet crescendos
synchronised with our love –
whispering, whispering
Lie with me
we shall seal our togetherness
with moistened lips
and eager breaths
before the falling of the sun
and the coming of the mellowing night
Now that's what I'm talkin about, love, love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love
Before it is too late, let us hasten up! sealing the togetherness with moist lips and eager breaths''.... An intense romantic aura surrounds the poem! !
A simple poem that speaks of great love! Wonderful, Valerie!
Its an exquisite composition and pleasure reading through.Its also the title of a British English film featuring love stories of London and the percussions of togetherness of an english woman who by chance fell in love with an english man in club, took a job for a family dream but the man was in the turmoil of womanizing and a decision hard to reckon with for a family.Watched that in 2008 and that too in London itself and tried to experience the pain and pleasure.Your poetry added valour and voice to the feminine character.
a beautiful write gentle and sweet feeling to it. love this write
Ah! Free verse that says something with great sweetness and purity.A body with soul. So beautiful in expression. If you can can do this well without rhyme, so let it be. WORTH AN 11
As only a poet can paint with words the intense feeling of Love. Very beautiful, Val
exquisitely executed piece beautiful and tender by turns 10/10 Thanks for sharing BB : O)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 10:03:43 PM # 1.0.0
this is love wonderful simple love