Life Will Be More Poem by Aqua Flower

Life Will Be More

Rating: 5.0


It's been a long journey
my body is weary now
but I know how to survive
I've learned how
I know I can count on me
to take care of all my needs
no one needs to worry
my roots are thick as old oak trees
and the fragrance of my flowers
will once again be adored
for those whom I choose to surround me
Life will be so much more

copyright @ Aqua Flower

Thursday, September 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: sickness,survival
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 28 September 2018

Such a well penned poem..............................

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Aqua Flower 30 September 2018

So glad you commented. but not sure why all the dots afterward............................................................................................................ :)

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Carl Roussell 27 September 2018

Surviving to feel who, and what, are important in life. A good write!

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Aqua Flower 30 September 2018

When you go through hardship, it makes you stronger and wiiser! Thank you for commenting my friend.

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Ashika Murali Acharya 27 September 2018

Wonderful! ! ! ! I just love your style of scripting profound thoughts.. 10+ of course dear

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Aqua Flower 30 September 2018

Thank you! What a nice comment! and rating!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2018

In long journey of life this is difficult to sustain but still struggle goes on to survive. Flowers adore moments of life again and again. An interesting sharing is done here...10

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Aqua Flower 27 September 2018

Journey is long but as long as you have love and health, everything can be endured.

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