The holidays have been a time of looking at my life.
It makes me wonder how I'm doing as a mother and a wife.
I hope I am successful in this most important task.
I know that I have tried my best...... is this all that I can ask?
It makes me think about the times I could have given more.
I have to also focus on our life beyond the door.
I see room for some improvement in this life I call my own.
It's lifes little introspections that helps to see if I have grown.
With each new year that passes I can say life has improved.
It helps when I make sure that negativity is removed
Poetic wisdom. Yep! It always hits you as the year is drawing to a close. You start by looking back over the past year, and before you know it, you're in infant school. Lovely piece Mary as always. love Denis Joe XXXXXX
I'm always trying Mary, but I suppose you can't teach on old Dog (Bitch in my case) new tricks. Nice write indeed. Keep improving, although you nice enough now. Love Ernestine XXX
I really enjoyed reading this. The last line is so true, staying positive about what you are doing is important. I felt your words. Looking at your work helps my writing, Thank you. Kindest Regards Slim. x.
the problem is when we stop thinking there is room for improvement mary :) nice one
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Welcome back Mary with a very nice poem! It's called growth, and it works better without the negativity, as you say. Warmly Ray