Lightning - Αστραπή Poem by Kostas Lagos
Lightning - Αστραπή
The fox is running
A red fissure in the woods
Time is standing still
My breath is taken away
As your gaze strikes my soul down
Αλεπού τρέχει
Σχισμή δάσους ερυθρή
Χρόνος σαν πάγος
Ανάσα που κόβεται
Το βλέμμα σου σαν χτυπά
A wonderful second line! A wonderful tanka with a great depth of meaning!
I changed this line 5 or 6 times! I'm very happy that you liked it!
Beautiful poem so nicely executed. It is on love. Thanks for sharing.
Love is the reason why our world keeps spinning. Even a drop of it is enough. Thanks!
A beautiful poem that captures the power of attraction and love. Superbly penned.10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/7/2024 5:32:40 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Down! ! Hitting my soul! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thank you for your poetic comment Edward