A Very Short Story
The room smelled constantly of Lily of the Valley.
I didn't know before that they smell so soft.
Really subtle scent.
In fact, I wanted to rhyme in a poem
But this story about the lily and its subtle scent has slammed all doors shut, so I started writing this short story.
Really short.
Twilight has come and the lights in the house are on.
They are HALOGEN lamps, in Dutch that can also be translated
as HALO-GEEN lamps (=hello-no lamps)
We are now on our way to the third advent week
with the final obligations....
Our house does not yet smell like a pine leaf odor. That'll come.
I wish all my Poem Hunter friends a blessed Sunday,
as ever
Sylvia Frances Chan
Sunday 15th December 2019
at 17.51 hrs. Dutch Evening
Lily of the valley is smelling right, Your poem is reflecting light. You have beautifully expressed your thought with interesting perception. Subtle scent is sprinkled all over the horizon. Twilight has come to light the house. A great perception is narrated with glorious visibility.
Truly, a heart warming write, so beautiful and touching. With warm wishes to you and family. Peace! ......10
Thank you so much for your most sensitive response, Dr. Geeta.I am touched very much to read that. God Bless You! Thank yiou for your precious 10.
A lovely and heartwarming write. Happy blessed Sunday, Sylvia. I love Lilly of the Valley. It is one of the most fragrant blooming plants. Wonderful short story.
Thank you so much for your precious response, Mrs. Juan-Austin. God Bless You!
Twilight! ! Scent of the lily, Light with the aroma, Delight of nature. 🌿🧚♂️ Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thank yiou so much Edward! Love your response of the poem. Gofd Bless You!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The title of this poem is very attractive and this poem motivates mind to feel the inner sense. Thank you very much for penning such a nice and excellent poem. This poem needs full 10 point.