Lily Of The Valley.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Lily Of The Valley....

Rating: 5.0


A Very Short Story

The room smelled constantly of Lily of the Valley.
I didn't know before that they smell so soft.
Really subtle scent.
In fact, I wanted to rhyme in a poem
But this story about the lily and its subtle scent has slammed all doors shut, so I started writing this short story.
Really short.
Twilight has come and the lights in the house are on.
They are HALOGEN lamps, in Dutch that can also be translated
as HALO-GEEN lamps (=hello-no lamps)

We are now on our way to the third advent week
with the final obligations....
Our house does not yet smell like a pine leaf odor. That'll come.

I wish all my Poem Hunter friends a blessed Sunday,

as ever
Sylvia Frances Chan
Sunday 15th December 2019
at 17.51 hrs. Dutch Evening

Lily Of The Valley....
Sunday, December 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: short,story
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wish all my Poem Hunter friends a Blessed Sunday,

as ever
Sylvia Frances Chan
Sunday 15th December 2019
at 17.51 hrs. Dutch Evening
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 21 December 2019

The title of this poem is very attractive and this poem motivates mind to feel the inner sense. Thank you very much for penning such a nice and excellent poem. This poem needs full 10 point.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 December 2019

Lily of the valley is smelling right, Your poem is reflecting light. You have beautifully expressed your thought with interesting perception. Subtle scent is sprinkled all over the horizon. Twilight has come to light the house. A great perception is narrated with glorious visibility.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 December 2019

Truly, a heart warming write, so beautiful and touching. With warm wishes to you and family. Peace! ......10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 December 2019

Thank you so much for your most sensitive response, Dr. Geeta.I am touched very much to read that. God Bless You! Thank yiou for your precious 10.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 December 2019

A lovely and heartwarming write. Happy blessed Sunday, Sylvia. I love Lilly of the Valley. It is one of the most fragrant blooming plants. Wonderful short story.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 December 2019

Thank you so much for your precious response, Mrs. Juan-Austin. God Bless You!

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 December 2019

Twilight! ! Scent of the lily, Light with the aroma, Delight of nature. 🌿🧚‍♂️ Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 December 2019

Thank yiou so much Edward! Love your response of the poem. Gofd Bless You!

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