Like a lily's shade
the sadness in your visage
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Ever So Beautifully And Powerfully Painted! ! ! ! ! Very Moving! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Such a beautiful haiku! I find a high spirited poetic research in depicting sadness! Fantastic use of simile! appreciated......10
Lily has a pale shade! A sad face too will look pale and it is more visible in candle light! A nice senryu!
Lovely haiku. The shade of a lily on a sad visage caught in the candle's light. Beautifully penned.10
A marvelous haiku that echoes sadness. A thought provoking piece well penned.10
The shade of lily is temporary as it is dependent of moon. So also the sadness of one's visage can omit in the candle's light of hope. Beautiful haiku shared. Thanks.10
Lily's sadness goes so far while gentle light touches the petals. This Haiku carries beauty of expression and this is a nice poem...10
In the candle light a beautiful face looking pale and sad but it's still a beauty. A nice poem.
Thak you mr Jawad! Glad you enjoyed it!