Sunday, April 8, 2018

Lily's Shade-Κρίνου Σκιά Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a lily's shade

the sadness in your visage
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Kostas Lagos
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Akhtar Jawad 27 April 2018

In the candle light a beautiful face looking pale and sad but it's still a beauty. A nice poem.

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Kostas Lagos 27 April 2018

Thak you mr Jawad! Glad you enjoyed it!

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Rebecca Navarre 16 April 2018

Ever So Beautifully And Powerfully Painted! ! ! ! ! Very Moving! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Kostas Lagos 17 April 2018

Thanks a lot for you really inspiring comment!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 April 2018

Such a beautiful haiku! I find a high spirited poetic research in depicting sadness! Fantastic use of simile! appreciated......10

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Kostas Lagos 16 April 2018

Thank you very much.So many nice words...

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Valsa George 15 April 2018

Lily has a pale shade! A sad face too will look pale and it is more visible in candle light! A nice senryu!

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Kostas Lagos 15 April 2018

Exactly the picture I had in mind! Thank you!

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Nudershada Cabanes 10 April 2018

Lovely haiku. The shade of a lily on a sad visage caught in the candle's light. Beautifully penned.10

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Kostas Lagos 10 April 2018

Such a generous comment! Thank you Nudershada!

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Rus Mer 10 April 2018

this poem has shaded my thoughts too... love for it

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Kostas Lagos 10 April 2018

Thak you for your so kind comment!

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Perdita Young 10 April 2018

Pretty shade on a pretty visage... Beautiful.

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Kostas Lagos 10 April 2018

I'm very glad that you liked it.Thank you very much!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 April 2018

A marvelous haiku that echoes sadness. A thought provoking piece well penned.10

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Kostas Lagos 10 April 2018

Thanks a lot for reading and leaving such a beautiful comment!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 April 2018

The shade of lily is temporary as it is dependent of moon. So also the sadness of one's visage can omit in the candle's light of hope. Beautiful haiku shared. Thanks.10

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Kostas Lagos 10 April 2018

Thank you once again mr.Mahakul!

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Rini Shibu 08 April 2018

Beautiful poem about shades of sadness

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Kostas Lagos 08 April 2018

Thank you very much for this lovely comment, Rini!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 April 2018

Lily's sadness goes so far while gentle light touches the petals. This Haiku carries beauty of expression and this is a nice poem...10

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Kostas Lagos 08 April 2018

I feel indebted to you for your comment! Thanks a lot!

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