Limerick.52. Medical Bill Poem by Valsa George

Limerick.52. Medical Bill

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“Now that you are cured of the disease
You can gladly go home in peace”
Said the doc to Lil
But seeing the bill
She collapsed from which she never rose!

Monday, September 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 14 September 2015

Wonderful satire..................I liked it. To take a humour out of this situation is amazing and noteworthy.10 Starts....

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 September 2015

A standard joke I thought that turned into a beautiful limerick. Made me laugh heartily.

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Hazel Durham 14 September 2015

Black humour beautifully expressed!

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T Rajan Evol 14 September 2015

Playing with life, money rules their life, undercover and on oath they do business deals, nice one. God Bless. Keep writing such nice poems.

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Narayana Aghalaya 04 April 2018

bill kills! she had a choice-die from disease or die from the bill. she has chosen. Nice limerick.

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Lyn Paul 19 September 2015

Hope they thought about dropping the prices after Lil's death. Thank You

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Bri Edwards 18 September 2015

how very strange. today i wrote wrote a short poem which ended in rose, using the same definition! also i recently read a poem (also short, by Kim Barney, Which Doctor?) in which he mentions the doctor's bill! is Lil lucky [doesn't have to pay bill now] or not? you be the judge! bri :)

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Valsa George 19 September 2015

Ha......ha.. ha! Do you mean to say death is preferable to paying the medical bill? ? ?

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 16 September 2015

So apt. so funny. Poor Lil. LIKED IT! ! ! ! !

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Sanjukta Nag 15 September 2015

Remarkable and very witty poem. Enjoyed the black humour.

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