Valsa George


Limerick.52. Medical Bill - Poem by Valsa George

“Now that you are cured of the disease
You can gladly go home in peace”
Said the doc to Lil
But seeing the bill
She collapsed from which she never rose!

Topic(s) of this poem: limerick


Comments about Limerick.52. Medical Bill by Valsa George

  • Lyn Paul (9/19/2015 4:35:00 PM)


    Hope they thought about dropping the prices after Lil's death.
    Thank You
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  • Bri Edwards (9/18/2015 2:36:00 PM)


    how very strange. today i wrote wrote a short poem which ended in rose, using the same definition! also i recently read a poem (also short, by Kim Barney, Which Doctor?) in which he mentions the doctor's bill!

    is Lil lucky [doesn't have to pay bill now] or not? you be the judge!

    bri :)
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    Valsa George Valsa George (9/19/2015 1:19:00 AM)

    Ha......ha.. ha! Do you mean to say death is preferable to paying the medical bill? ? ?

  • Roop Rekha Bhaskar (9/16/2015 4:05:00 AM)


    So apt. so funny. Poor Lil. LIKED IT! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/15/2015 2:53:00 AM)


    Remarkable and very witty poem. Enjoyed the black humour. (Report) Reply

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (9/14/2015 10:55:00 PM)


    Poor Lil. RIP. Funny write. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/14/2015 3:12:00 PM)


    Humour inspite of pain so nicely captured like....Said the doc to Lil
    But seeing the bill
    She collapsed from which she never rose! Many thanks dear madam for posting such an amusing limerick. ....10
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  • (9/14/2015 10:25:00 AM)


    Playing with life, money rules their life, undercover and on oath they do business deals, nice one. God Bless. Keep writing such nice poems. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (9/14/2015 9:33:00 AM)


    Black humour beautifully expressed! (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/14/2015 5:29:00 AM)


    A standard joke I thought that turned into a beautiful limerick. Made me laugh heartily. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (9/14/2015 5:07:00 AM)


    Everything has been commercialized, whether it's medicine, education or any other respectable profession. I remember my teen age when doctors prescribed very few patient medicines, when teachers took extra classes to complete the course. Our generation is the last generation socialized by honest men. A great poem! ............10 (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/14/2015 4:47:00 AM)


    Wonderful satire..................I liked it. To take a humour out of this situation is amazing and noteworthy.10 Starts.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 14, 2015



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