Limerick.64. Argument Poem by Valsa George

Limerick.64. Argument

Rating: 5.0


Pointing to the sky, said one- “A loon”
“No”- said the other- “It’s a heron”
The argument ran thus
Amid the aged, unwise
But both were wrong, it was a balloon

Thursday, October 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2015

Amusing, funny and captivating one. Nice limerick. - - - - 10

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Loke Kok Yee 30 October 2015

that was a lot of fun thanks Valsa-10

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Sanjukta Nag 30 October 2015

Heron and loon turn out to be a balloon.. it's a great ending, though there is no ending of such funny arguments. Loved it.10

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M Asim Nehal 29 October 2015

Ha ha ha.........There is no end to an argument better resolve it amicably, nice satire in your limerick, I enjoy them thoroughly...Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 September 2019

Yes, this one is a good laugh, well done.

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Narayana Aghalaya 04 April 2018

aged are not all wise; but most are argumentative.nicely captured in this lovely limerick!

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Akhtar Jawad 25 January 2016

I recollect an Urdu humorist who described an abstract painting. He asked a woman standing with him and watching the painting, Is it a water melon? She replied, You can say, it's sweet and soft skinned, nice to kill the thirst, but it's a woman.

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Valsa George 25 January 2016

Ha.... ha..! This is so interesting Akhtar ji! A modern abstract painting can be interpreted in any manner. Yes, opinions can widely differ!

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Hazel Durham 08 November 2015

Great Limerick beautifully composed and delivered with humour and panache!

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 02 November 2015

Nice one. Seems a puzzle in it too. loved reading it

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