Valsa George

Limerick.64. Argument - Poem by Valsa George

Pointing to the sky, said one- “A loon”
“No”- said the other- “It’s a heron”
The argument ran thus
Amid the aged, unwise
But both were wrong, it was a balloon

Topic(s) of this poem: limerick

Comments about Limerick.64. Argument by Valsa George

  • Narayana Aghalaya (4/4/2018 8:38:00 PM)

    aged are not all wise; but most are argumentative.nicely captured in this lovely limerick! (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (1/25/2016 2:22:00 AM)

    I recollect an Urdu humorist who described an abstract painting. He asked a woman standing with him and watching the painting, Is it a water melon? She replied, You can say, it's sweet and soft skinned, nice to kill the thirst, but it's a woman. (Report) Reply

    Valsa George (1/25/2016 5:40:00 AM)

    Ha.... ha..! This is so interesting Akhtar ji! A modern abstract painting can be interpreted in any manner. Yes, opinions can widely differ!

  • Hazel Durham (11/8/2015 7:33:00 AM)

    Great Limerick beautifully composed and delivered with humour and panache! (Report) Reply

  • Roop Rekha Bhaskar (11/2/2015 1:31:00 AM)

    Nice one. Seems a puzzle in it too. loved reading it (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/30/2015 10:10:00 AM)

    Amusing, funny and captivating one. Nice limerick. - - - - 10 (Report) Reply

  • (10/30/2015 12:46:00 AM)

    that was a lot of fun
    thanks Valsa-10
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  • Sanjukta Nag (10/30/2015 12:37:00 AM)

    Heron and loon turn out to be a balloon.. it's a great ending, though there is no ending of such funny arguments. Loved it.10 (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/29/2015 11:50:00 PM)

    Ha ha ha.........There is no end to an argument better resolve it amicably, nice satire in your limerick, I enjoy them thoroughly...Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (10/29/2015 11:14:00 PM)

    Quite amusing argument and possibly indulged in by aged people for the sake of argument only. Obstinacy inducted with ageing takes it's toll many a times and such people enter into argument knowing fully well that they may be wrong.
    Enjoyed the limerick. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 29, 2015

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