Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 248,160 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Limerick-8(Monkey And Junkie) - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Once a monkey riding on a donkey-
Went to market with maiden Rinky.
Over a bridge monkey saw a junkie,
Monkey sprang over him to make him funky,
Junkie threw him to water and made him flunky.

Topic(s) of this poem: human and animal, humour

Comments about Limerick-8(Monkey And Junkie) by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/11/2016 8:43:00 PM)

    Feedback received
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    xA much enjoyed poem! Thanks for sharing.
    23 Nov 2015 by Elizabeth Squires | Reply

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    xThis is amazing dear Kumarmani. Thanks for sharing.
    23 Nov 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply

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    xInteresting one! TFS
    25 Nov 2015 by Bipin Churchung Rabha | Reply

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    xThis is thoroughly captivating and engrossing. Thank you for sharing.
    26 Nov 2015 by Sneha SK | Reply

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    xHe he, brought a smile, [3
    27 Nov 2015 by laura loveheart | Reply

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    xahhhh that was adorable! great one!
    27 Nov 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply

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    xMade me smile too :)
    1 Dec 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply

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    x.............this was so much fun to read....I enjoyed it :) ★
    3 Dec 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply

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    xHaha witty penning, always in need of smiles, thank you for sharing, enjoyed!
    3 Dec 2015 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply

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    xGreat word-play, and in a second language too. Clever and entertaining.
    16 Jan by Erik 99 | Reply
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  • Marie Shine (8/3/2016 4:59:00 AM)

    Human and animal behaviour excellently captured in this funny Limerick. Fine crafting, dear Kumarmani. Thank you for sharing... (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/25/2015 8:39:00 AM)

    LOL.....This monkey and Junkie is humorous funkie....10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/22/2015 11:48:00 PM)

    thanks for the humor sir (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/22/2015 7:07:00 PM)

    A interesting and humorous limerick. (Report) Reply

  • Poem By (11/22/2015 6:27:00 PM)

    you're feeling quite spunky
    to write this funky?

    pure whimsy!
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 22, 2015

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