He saw a beautiful girl under a tree
His heart started pumping in glee
Made a pass at the girl
She called out to alert all
Sensing danger, he began to flee!
Dear Valsa, This is such a funny and enjoyable poem. Really had a good laugh! The picture is great. I suppose, this is a common situation in our land! A full 10!
This Limerick is much interesting. I appreciate the way of composing. Visited time and again.
plight of roadside romeos.nice cartoon.very cheerful limerick!
Very funny this Limerick is really and this makes laugh. Such think happens very often. Beautiful girl under a tree creates humor. Wisely penned! 10....
His futile attempt went down the drain.... Girls should be alert from these good for nothing men. Nice thought.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
No he he didn't runaway, he saw another girl more beautiful and more practical. The girl was served with ice cream and cold soft beverage. He paid the bill and said goodbye so long we meet again. The girl replied, sorry, tonight I am flying back home, thanks for your hospitality. So sad when he turned back he saw the previous girl, and she said, I am a native, I think it's now lunch time.
Ha... ha! Akhtar ji... Do you mean to say that girls are quite clever and men, mere fools?