Limerick-88. Futile Attempt Poem by Valsa George

Limerick-88. Futile Attempt

Rating: 5.0


He saw a beautiful girl under a tree
His heart started pumping in glee
Made a pass at the girl
She called out to alert all
Sensing danger, he began to flee!

Limerick-88. Futile Attempt
Thursday, October 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: danger
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 25 October 2016

No he he didn't runaway, he saw another girl more beautiful and more practical. The girl was served with ice cream and cold soft beverage. He paid the bill and said goodbye so long we meet again. The girl replied, sorry, tonight I am flying back home, thanks for your hospitality. So sad when he turned back he saw the previous girl, and she said, I am a native, I think it's now lunch time.

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Valsa George 26 October 2016

Ha... ha! Akhtar ji... Do you mean to say that girls are quite clever and men, mere fools?

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Bisy Untan 20 October 2016

Ha ha ha! Funny! Expecting more against these social evils.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 October 2016

Dear Valsa, This is such a funny and enjoyable poem. Really had a good laugh! The picture is great. I suppose, this is a common situation in our land! A full 10!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 21 October 2016

Nice lesson for all those peeping toms.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2020

This Limerick is much interesting. I appreciate the way of composing. Visited time and again.

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 February 2019

She called out to alert all// she was sensitive!

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Narayana Aghalaya 01 March 2018

plight of roadside romeos.nice cartoon.very cheerful limerick!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2016

Very funny this Limerick is really and this makes laugh. Such think happens very often. Beautiful girl under a tree creates humor. Wisely penned! 10....

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Aarzoo Mehek 27 October 2016

His futile attempt went down the drain.... Girls should be alert from these good for nothing men. Nice thought.

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