Limerick-87. Don't Be In Haste! Poem by Valsa George

Limerick-87. Don't Be In Haste!

Rating: 5.0


On first sight, he decided to make her his mate
Neither of them had the patience to wait
Alas! He fell in a rut
As she was a slut
And there was no choice, but to separate!

Saturday, November 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: marriage
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2016

Slut, rut! Divorce. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 09 November 2016

There when it comes to stut. That is where separation should be called. Thank you for sharing. is no chpi

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Nosheen Irfan 16 November 2016

Your limericks always cheer me up. I'm so inspired to try this form of poetry. A wonderful write that teaches us a good lesson in a very lighthearted way. A10

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Kim Barney 05 November 2016

I was going to say welcome to the limerick world, and then I checked and saw that you have actually written more of them than I have! Well done.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 November 2019

Look before you leap, and if you do not this counsel keep.... you will be in trouble deep. Good laugh, this limerick.

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 February 2019

for a there is no LOVE! ! ! ////

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Narayana Aghalaya 01 March 2018

lovely limerick; words seem harsh, but the truth is bitter.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 December 2016

In haste! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 12 December 2016

A beautiful Limerick, a bitter truth, I am speechless, so question of a reply does not arise.

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