Limerick- Attraction Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- Attraction

Rating: 4.9


As he went for a long country stroll
he discerned losing his heart and soul
to a lovely lass,
cutting fodder grass
whom he badly wanted to cajole

Limerick- Attraction
Thursday, November 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,infatuation ,limerick
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Nine syllables each in 1,2 and 5 with five syllables in 3 and 4 lines
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 12 December 2019

The natural human instinct precisely captured in this well-composed limerick! A similarity can be seen in birds as well: it is a spectacle of courtship!

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Its just like an Indian story.... and at last he marries the lass. Thank you Valsa George. You have wonderfully created a cinema in just a limerick

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 December 2019

and any one would if one could lovely lass ma'am

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Indira Renganathan 05 December 2019

What happened next...? a natural happening in a nice interesting limerick form..and of course that lass is beautiful.. thank you Valsa for this cute limerick

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2019

Lovely lass who is cutting fodder grass is understanding his coax. Nicely penned. Beautiful Limerick dear madam. Thanks for sharing with beautiful graphic.

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Khairul Ahsan 07 May 2020

I love your limericks. This one, with an appopriate gaphic added, tells an absorbing short story that leaves the readers asking themselves at the end- 'what happened next'?

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Susan Williams 18 March 2020

I like the gentle humor in so many of your limericks- - and this one has an added touch of romance! ! ! 10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 08 February 2020

Well written Limerick. Humour as it is plus bit romance! 10+

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 December 2019

Attraction has great motivational power. The way you have presented this poem is heart winning. Visiting this gain I am very happy. This is of course a nice fun giving Limerick.

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Rajnish Manga 13 December 2019

Awesome and interesting. The picture that comes to mind after reading the makes it more enjoyable. Thanks Valsa ji.

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