Limerick- Bee Sting Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- Bee Sting

Rating: 5.0


Once he spotted a hive of honey bees
Upon a branch amid a clump of trees
He thought of taking honey
That would fetch him some money
He shook the branch, what followed, can't you guess?

Limerick- Bee Sting
Friday, February 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: accident,painful
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
10 syllables each in lines 1,2 and 5 and 7 syllables in lines 3 and 4
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 10 February 2019

Oh ho.... Poor fellow, there is no gain without pains and this pain he will remember for long. Nice humorous Limerick with great photo in support...10+++++

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Anjandev Roy 03 March 2020

Such a wonderful write. anjandev roy.

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Kim Barney 08 March 2019

Yes, I can guess, and what a mess! Ouch!

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Valsa George 09 March 2019

Indeed a mess! Thanks a lot Kim.....!

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Glen Kappy 03 March 2019

hey, valsa! just before reading this the thought came that i was like a bee visiting my favorite ph poets. on this limerick and the picture—yikes! hoping you're well in all ways, glen

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Valsa George 03 March 2019

Enjoyed your comparison of your visit to the PH poets to that of the bee's visit to its favorite flowers! Thanks a lot Glen!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 February 2019

This lovely Limerick is truly fun giving. Reading this lovely Limerick we get joy again and again. This poem is very uplifting..

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Valsa George 20 February 2019

It is fun giving, also pain inducing! Thank you Kumaramani Sir!

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 16 February 2019

Pitiable! Very well penned.

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Valsa George 20 February 2019

Yes, it is indeed a sorry sight! Thank you Akham!

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