M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,355 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Limerick - Cat And Dog - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Sleeping together but dreaming separately
Living together yet fighting desperately
Life is a matter of survival
In daylight we may have difference at night its revival
Emotions will meet occasionally but body will never meet frenziedly

Topic(s) of this poem: humorous, life, limerick

Form: Limerick

Comments about Limerick - Cat And Dog by M. Asim Nehal

  • (12/10/2015 11:29:00 AM)

    Well thought man...10 (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/11/2015 6:34:00 PM)

    Life has so many seasons but all the seasons ultimately lead to love. (Report) Reply

  • (11/11/2015 10:21:00 AM)

    Awesome one Asimji, ........ (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/11/2015 2:01:00 AM)

    Living together is nice attitude definitely. Very nice work shared with interesting thought. Fantastic definitely...10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/10/2015 11:49:00 AM)

    A marvelous poem. Almost transcendent as a limerick (Report) Reply

  • (11/10/2015 9:19:00 AM)

    warmth brought them together lovely limerick-10 (Report) Reply

  • Free Bird (11/10/2015 4:53:00 AM)

    Life is a matter of survival.
    Beautifull Limerick
    (Report) Reply

  • (11/10/2015 4:17:00 AM)

    An evidence of the law that Cats and dogs are enemies proved by being an exception on face value but retaining those traits in hibernating form. Nice write. Enjoyed.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • Liza Sudina (11/10/2015 3:47:00 AM)

    They are lovely,
    they are cute!
    their love has no dispute!
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 10, 2015

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