Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Wednesday, April 3, 2019

Limerick: Fly Back Home! Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you've spent too much time on your quest
and you can't find a good place to rest,
get right out of the race,
for there is a good place:
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Kim Barney
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Anjandev Roy 05 December 2020

Magnificent write......thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.

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Nosheen Irfan 07 April 2019

What a superb limerick. So rich in depth and meaning. Indeed we can always find a way back home. Such beautiful poetry.

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Kim Barney 07 April 2019

Nosheen, so good to hear from you again! Thanks for visiting and commenting!

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wes vogler 06 April 2019

Nice one Kim would be hard to improve upon and the ladies will eat it up

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Kim Barney 07 April 2019

Thanks for the compliment and the comment, Wes!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 April 2019

One of the best limericks I have read here. So comforting. Home is always in our hearts. Always gives solace. A lovely poem beautifully crafted.

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Kim Barney 07 April 2019

Thank you, Rose Marie. You are so kind with your words of praise.

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Prabir Gayen 04 April 2019

If you've spent too much time on your quest and you can't find a good place to rest, get right out of the race, for there is a good place: you can always come home to your nest Sweetness

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Prabir Gayen 04 April 2019

Beautiful limerick..... fantastic poem....

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Kim Barney 06 April 2019

Thank you, Prabir. I'm glad you liked it.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 April 2019

Reminds me of the song WHO SAYS YOU CAN'T GO HOME popularized by Bon Jovi... Pretty poem, sir Kim....10++++++++++

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Kim Barney 06 April 2019

I'm not familiar with that song, Sir Bernard, but thanks for the comment. (They still haven't made you a saint, I see.)

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Sandra Feldman 04 April 2019

Reassuring to know That when we go As we have done, We come home again! This little gem sure hits home with me. Thanks Kim.

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Kim Barney 06 April 2019

Sandra, dear friend, thank you so much for your comment.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 04 April 2019

Home, sweet home...... Nothing like sweet home, at the end. Thanks for sharing the inspiring poem.

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Kim Barney 06 April 2019

Thank you, Jayatissa. Your comment is appreciated.

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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