Limerick - Innocence Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Limerick - Innocence

Rating: 5.0


He was a teetotaler and non-smoker
Went to supermall for a saunter
Saw hoarding very big, smoking kills
Purchased a pack of cigarette, wills
To kill the infecting virus, bacteria and cancer.

Thursday, October 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: innocence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 15 October 2015

Very wonderful Limerick shared on innocence.....Really wise and contented...10

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Rajnish Manga 15 October 2015

Smoking kills......... virus and bacteria. Ultimate humour. Enjoyed reading it, M. Asim ji. May I say a few words about the rhyming structure. It would be wonderful if it is: aa-bb-a. Thanks.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 October 2015

Fantastic imagery. Enjoyed the limerick. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Loke Kok Yee 15 October 2015

Ho! Ho! Ho! Now he has to sort out the cancer, Thanks.

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T Rajan Evol 17 October 2015

Really funny, made me laugh out loud

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Sanjukta Nag 16 October 2015

Hahaha! Vert funny. enjoyed it.

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* Sunprincess * 15 October 2015

.......ha ha....very good...love the play on words ★

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Kelly Kurt 15 October 2015

In a world where evil lurks around each corner, Is a shot of liquor and a smoke really that bad.: -) Technically, Rajnish is correct on the rhyming scheme Thanks, Mohammed

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Liza Sudina 15 October 2015

a teetotaler and non-smoker - as if about me!

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