Limerick R49 General At Fault / जनरल की गलती Poem by Rajnish Manga

Limerick R49 General At Fault / जनरल की गलती

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जनरल की गलती
एक जनरल ने गलती कर दी अपनी ‘डेट ऑफ़ बर्थ' में;
खड़ा हो गया झगड़ा इस पर कई स्तरों पर व्यर्थ में;
न अफसरशाही ने पहचाना,
न ही न्यायालय ने माना,
बोले, "मैं जल्दी क्यों होऊं रिटायर यह तो बड़ा अनर्थ है".

Monday, July 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: bureaucracy ,discipline,government,mistake,office,retirement
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

There was a lot on this issue of General's date of birth in the newspapers, sometime back. With your Limerick, Rajnish ji it has rekindled the issue with humorous recollection. The mistakes people make! Loved your Limerick, Rajnish ji.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 July 2018

I like ur quotes hahahah thanks.....You have complemented the limerick's background-story and made it easy to understand. I am tempted to repeat your words: IF THERE HAD BEEN NO MISTAKE HOW WOULD HE OF POLITICS TASTE THE SAVORED CAKE

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Rajnish Manga 12 July 2018

Oh! Let's carry on with this reciprocity. Nice idea. Thanks, Dear Poet Friend.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 July 2018

Appreciated this fabulous Limerick! Enjoyed the humor! Thanks for sharing....10

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Rajnish Manga 11 July 2018

Thank you very much, Dr Dillip, for your kind words of appreciation and for support.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 July 2018

SAD MY COMMENT EVAPORATED

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Rajnish Manga 11 July 2018

Fruits of labour can never dissipate. Thank you, My Friend.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 July 2018

Then we learn he was promoted as a GOVT MINISTER...EXTENDED SERVICE FOR LIFE SO he must now B happy BIGGER SERVICE IF THERE HAD BEEN NO MISTAKE HOW WOULD HE OF POLITICS TASTE THE SAVORED CAKE ' GODS PLANNING MAKE NO MISTAKE HE KNOWS EVERY ONE'S STAKE

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 July 2018

Dear Raj I like ur quotes hahahah thanks.....You have complemented the limerick's background-story and made it easy to understand. I am tempted to repeat your words: IF THERE HAD BEEN NO MISTAKE HOW WOULD HE OF POLITICS TASTE THE SAVORED CAKE

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Rajnish Manga 11 July 2018

You have complemented the limerick's background-story and made it easy to understand. I am tempted to repeat your words: IF THERE HAD BEEN NO MISTAKE HOW WOULD HE OF POLITICS TASTE THE SAVORED CAKE

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