Little Yellow Flowers Poem by Valerie Dohren

Little Yellow Flowers

Rating: 5.0

Little yellow flowers
Dancing in the breeze
Little yellow flowers
Huddled round the trees
Little yellow flowers
Seemed to know my pain
Little yellow flowers
In my mem`ry will remain

Captain Cur 01 July 2012

It's the simple things and small memories that give us our greatest comfort and cause our quills to write. I sense you saw their vulnerability yet they supported one another through the storms of life. Great write.

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Danny Draper 29 June 2012

Just read this again, lovely. Thank you Val.

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Elna Nel 13 July 2012

this is beautiful, in its simplicity

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Adeline Foster 03 July 2012

Perhaps those flowers are dandelions. Read mine - Of Dandelions and Tears - Adeline

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Juan Olivarez 03 July 2012

In the Great mojave desert, spring brings an abundance of little yellow flowers. I can't tell you the joy they bring, beautiful poem Val.

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Navya 19 August 2018

I am great. Fan of Abdul. Kalam

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Ken E Hall 01 September 2013

The message from the little flowers gives a soothing message short and luvli poem

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R.j. Wynn 13 June 2013

!) I mean 10, great write, perfect.

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Walterrean Salley 14 July 2012

Makes you take a second look at life and nature—the little things that mean so much. Very beautiful, rich and terse.

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Neela Nath Das 14 July 2012

It reminds me the lines of Wordsworth's poem, Daffodils. Short but very deep.

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