Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 17,324 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Live In Present - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Alone, I was driving down the traffic lane,
My car got struck in the traffic,
And also, my mind got struck in the traffic of worries,
I saw, I met with an accident,
on the way to hospital.....
The yelling sounds of horns woke me up..
I found, the traffic got struck because of me..
I pinched myself,
Oh! I am alive, so happy I was...

© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/23/2017 12:04:00 AM)

    The traffic of worriness hits the mind with forgetfulness and hence it is difficult to create poems. I appreciate your way of presentation and pemnanship. (Report) Reply

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  • Lyn Paul (6/27/2015 6:36:00 PM)

    The traffic of worries A concern this can be if there are too many things filling the mind. Here, I witness so many speeding, aggressive women drivers with children in the car. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (3/30/2014 12:06:00 AM)

    yes it is right what you say here. but if we always remain in present it shall not be able to creat poem. i appreciate your thought and write. Regards.10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (5/14/2013 6:05:00 AM)

    I am alive, so happy I was. good one, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 1, 2014

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