Living Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Living

Rating: 5.0


In these foot steps I have walked
a thousand miles to get back home

In these thoughts of mine
I have been back in time
In these thoughts of mine
I see alone

All the years I have been
all the days I have seen
all the seasons gone

The man made clock never stops
tick tock tick tock
time will soon be gone

Thursday, October 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 25 October 2018

In these thoughts of mine! ! To dine with life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Muzahidul Reza 25 October 2018

Fantastic poem with emotion, thanks for sharing

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Muzahidul Reza 25 October 2018

In these foot steps I have walked a thousand miles to get back home, .......... great done,10

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Tom Allport 30 October 2018

A very true write? We all live till it is time to clock off! ........well penned Dave

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M Asim Nehal 29 October 2018

True, marching towards end, but with face and soul upright.10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 October 2018

This is a beautiful poem on life and death having a nice theme which we can find out in last stanza. Thanks for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 October 2018

A beautiful poem with a meaningful message. It captures the realities of life. Liked the final stanza. Striking lines. Well penned.

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Paul Brookes 26 October 2018

The circularity of life We tread out our days Our tragedy id we know we will die our blessing we don't know when Great poem certainly made me think.

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