Loneliness Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Loneliness

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After a lavish evening walk
And splendor dinner party
I went for a quite sound sleep
Within few minutes
I was in dreams
Body was resting yet mind was
Awake with unfulfilled thoughts
When I woke up it was nightmare
Nobody was around
Not a single person
I rushed outside to see
Where have they vanished?
Suddenly, as I kept walking
I saw nothing no trees
No birds, no creatures
I was all alone,
Where have they gone?
Why I am alone, what is this?
Who took them all or
am I taken somewhere?
Yes, I remembered that I prayed
For this that Oh Almighty
I wish to remain alone with no one around
Is my wish fulfilled or what?
I got scared …
No, no I want someone around
Life won't be easy alone
Loneliness is good for some hours or days
But not forever

Tuesday, December 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 15 December 2015

Nobody was around; but, there is hope to move on. Nice work.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 28 February 2016

No, no I want someone around Life won't be easy alone..........life won't be hard alone but not easy either in some ways...Beautiful...thankfully for this Beautiful sharing :)

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Darren Jkoeryo 20 December 2015

Nice poem.................10+

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M Asim Nehal 20 September 2018

Thanks Much D J ,

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T Rajan Evol 15 December 2015

Awesome poem.................I liked it........10

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M Asim Nehal 20 September 2018

Thanks Much T R E.......................

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Kelly Kurt 15 December 2015

An excess of anything is not good.

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Valsa George 15 December 2015

Yes..... we all need some privacy.... to be alone with our thoughts! But loneliness is suffocating..... Man by nature is gregarious and most people find happiness in company! A great write emphasizing on man's need to be social!

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